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Tuesday 8 May 2012

A Poem of War

I am a soldier
I can smell that repulsive stew we have to eat
I can hear terrifying screams from my former trench mates
I can see death right before my eyes
I can touch fresh blood seeping from my wounds
I can taste the biscuits my wife and children sent me
I can sense sorrow the air is full of it
I can feel the letter I am reading over and over again
War is horror war is death

By Kate
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14 comments:

  1. Hannah8 May 2012 at 15:02

    That is a great poem Kate. You are really good at writing. It sounds like war was terrible.

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    1. Kate8 May 2012 at 15:08

      Yes it was and thanks I aprechiate that

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  2. Kate8 May 2012 at 15:10

    I am so glad I didnt go to war and I feel sorry for the ones that did.

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    1. Gemma9 May 2012 at 18:53

      That was a grate pome kate and
      yes I agree im
      glad that I wasn't in the war

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  3. Oliver8 May 2012 at 15:54

    That is such an awesome poem Kate!

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  4. Renee8 May 2012 at 17:10

    That is a amazing poem Kate. We are so lucky that we don't have to go to war.

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  5. Dannii8 May 2012 at 18:38

    BRAVO, BRAVO nice poem!!!

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  6. Brooklyn8 May 2012 at 19:42

    I am so glad that I didn't have to go to war. that was a great poem Kate!

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  7. Brooklyn8 May 2012 at 19:45

    well done Kate

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  8. Micheal9 May 2012 at 16:14

    NICE Poem!:)

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  9. Hannah-Rose9 May 2012 at 17:30

    Awesome poem Kate.

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  10. Sam11 May 2012 at 15:13

    That was a really good poem Kate . I'm glad I'm wasn't in the war it sounds really horrible.

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  11. Alysha11 May 2012 at 15:19

    That is a really great poem Kate. AWESOME JOB!!

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  12. Maddie13 May 2012 at 20:48

    I never thought about the things that they have to do but from reading your poem I did . I'm so happy I'm not in the war.

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