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Tuesday 8 May 2012

War

'' Boom'' Tank engines rattle as torpedos are charged through the gloomy fog.
Blood splatters as soldiers flop and fall in wartery mud pits or cruel barb wire.
 Planes make deafening sounds as they bomb the battle feild.
 Gunpowder fills the air as guns fight furiously.
I fear my life is over.

By Hannah-Rose
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11 comments:

  1. Hannah8 May 2012 at 15:05

    That was fantastic Hannah-rose. I am so so glad I wasn't there.

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  2. Kate8 May 2012 at 15:06

    Aah war sounds horrible by the way nice poem.

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  3. Oliver8 May 2012 at 15:52

    What a good poem!

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  4. Dannii8 May 2012 at 18:39

    Have you ever thought of taking poetry as a career when you are older!!! :)

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  5. Micheal9 May 2012 at 07:39

    That's one nice poem. ;)

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  6. Hannah-Rose9 May 2012 at 17:25

    Thats nice.
    From Mrs Cook

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  7. Sam11 May 2012 at 15:11

    I am so so so so so so glad it wasn't me in the war otherwise i wouldn't be here!

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  8. Alysha11 May 2012 at 15:16

    I really love the description. Its a really great poem Hannah-Rose!

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  9. Maddie13 May 2012 at 20:41

    I really love your poem because it can really sink into your heart ,amazing!

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  10. Brooklyn25 May 2012 at 16:18

    Good poem.

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